I am learning to write a narrative with a plot, problem resolved and a sequence.
The Crash
“ Crash! ”John fault so his sister was siting next to him and he had looked at her and she looked dead.
She had fallen out of the car she might be dead she might be hurt.
We were driving home form the pictures late at night.
John thought that it was his fault that might mean he has to go to prison what should he do should he face the cops .
He decided to face the cops and get his sister back but she was lost in the traffic.
The ambulance Driver and John to court it wasn't really his fault it was the ambulance Drivers fault because he crashed into John and his sister. The ambulance Driver had to pay to fix the car.
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